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docs/about.rst

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ About Pillow
 Goals
 -----
 
-The fork authors' goal is to foster active development of PIL through:
+The fork author's goal is to foster active development of PIL through:
 
 - Continuous integration testing via `Travis CI`_
 - Publicized development activity on `GitHub`_
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ The fork authors' goal is to foster active development of PIL through:
 License
 -------
 
-Like PIL, Pillow is licensed under the MIT-a-like `PIL Software License <http://www.pythonware.com/products/pil/license.htm>`_::
+Like PIL, Pillow is licensed under the MIT-like open source `PIL Software License <http://www.pythonware.com/products/pil/license.htm>`_::
 
     Software License
 
@@ -35,10 +35,7 @@ Like PIL, Pillow is licensed under the MIT-a-like `PIL Software License <http://
 Why a fork?
 -----------
 
-PIL is not setuptools compatible. Please see `this Image-SIG post`_ for a more
+PIL is not setuptools compatible. Please see `this Image-SIG post`_ for a more detailed explanation. Also, PIL's current bi-yearly (or greater) release schedule is too infrequent to accommodate the large number and frequency of issues reported.
-detailed explanation. Also, PIL's current bi-yearly (or greater) release
-schedule is too infrequent to accommodate the large number and frequency of
-issues reported.
 
 .. _this Image-SIG post: https://mail.python.org/pipermail/image-sig/2010-August/006480.html
 
@@ -50,14 +47,10 @@ What about PIL?
     Prior to Pillow 2.0.0, very few image code changes were made. Pillow 2.0.0
     added Python 3 support and includes many bug fixes from many contributors.
 
-As more time passes since the last PIL release, the likelihood of a new PIL
+As more time passes since the last PIL release, the likelihood of a new PIL release decreases. However, we've yet to hear an official "PIL is dead" announcement. So if you still want to support PIL, please `report issues here first`_, then `open corresponding Pillow tickets here`_.
-release decreases. However, we've yet to hear an official "PIL is dead"
-announcement. So if you still want to support PIL, please
-`report issues here first`_, then
-`open the corresponding Pillow tickets here`_.
 
 .. _report issues here first: https://bitbucket.org/effbot/pil-2009-raclette/issues
 
-.. _open the corresponding Pillow tickets here: https://github.com/python-pillow/Pillow/issues
+.. _open corresponding Pillow tickets here: https://github.com/python-pillow/Pillow/issues
 
-Please provide a link to the PIL ticket so we can track the issue(s) upstream.
+Please provide a link to the first ticket so we can track the issue(s) upstream.

docs/index.rst

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Pillow is the "friendly PIL fork" by `Alex Clark and Contributors <https://githu
    handbook/appendices
    releasenotes/index.rst
    about
-   original-readme
+   pre-fork-readme
 
 Indices and tables
 ==================

docs/pre-fork-readme.rst

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-Original PIL README
+Pre-fork README
-===================
+===============
 
-What follows is the original PIL 1.1.7 README file contents.
+What follows is the untouched, original pre-fork PIL 1.1.7 README file contents.
 
 ::